aCreator's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[End of No Beginning - Heartbea]

It's been a while since my last comment on one of your songs and also since I heard a song from you... So I had to go back to your older works and compare them with the newer ones. And I can say that you improved. More clearer mixing, better kicks, some more variety and different atmospheres. Your other song "Chid's play" surprised me in a way because it was so different from the others which I think is very good. Try to find your own style of music and continue to experiment.

With this song you leveled up I think because it is different, more smooth and more fluid than the other songs. Keep it up you're on a good way!

What I STILL think you should do now is to make longer tracks. OK, this one is a loop and is supposed to be short... but... I know it's really hard to make a track long (Even I have this problem right now) and not making him too repetitive is also an art. In one minute you can only make one part of the story that will be your song. Personally I am more satisfied with my tracks which have more parts than my shorter ones but do what you want.

Shorter review as the last one... full of "I think" but I hope It'll be useful in some way... I didn't go through all the instruments and the structure and so on because I think this too much of personal taste (I like them by the way..)
This time it's 4 stars because like I said "you leveled up". :)

So... what else to say than:
Never stop creating

RangerInTheWoods responds:

Thanks man! And i really WANT to make my tracks longer, but the problem is that i'm using the demo version of FL (Which doesn't allow reloading songs to work on another day) and i really don't feel like paying so much money when music making isn't going to be like a career to me. It's more of a hobby, but i like it alot!

[Amuzing Rides]

That's a great track!
The beginning is sort of strange and "experimental" (which is not bad at all) and then crash at 0:31 broke this intro and made a really smooth transition to the next part. I really liked this intro.
Nice melody and lead.
At first I thought that the first build would lead to the drop and was a little disappointed but then the real one came and I was happy ^^.
I really like your percussions like your claps and shaker.
BUT! There are two things I thought could be improved.
The first one is this really annoying white noise the most of the time. It sounds like a "demo expire sound" to me (I actually know a free demo program where white noise kicks in after 10 minutes of use. It sounds exactly like that). The second thing is the bass but I think this is personal taste.
So... Keep it up!!! :)

EctiBot responds:

Thx for review, aCreator. I understand your points, though personally I like a lot of whitenoise in my tracks. A matter of taste I guess. Glad you liked the track anyways :D I'll be sure to keep making music for you guyz to enjoy ;).

[Countdown]

I really like the beginning and the heavy beat. The intro also has some nice melodies but what I think could be improved is the choice of the instruments. I'm almost certain that you can obtain a deeper and more aggressive bass and more dark and sinister leads! So... keep it up!!! :)

8-BitCat responds:

Thanks for the advice ^.^ i'll keep it in mind for sure c:

[Arman§dragon 2]

I really like the beginning of this track, how the lead submerges from the dark. Especially when the guitar comes in (It reminded me of a melody in the film "Jo"). The beginning brings also tension in the song. At the end of the song I felt like the syncopated bass began to be to repetitive...
But overall I really liked the atmosphere this song was forming.
Nice Track! :)

Aphyrmehrius responds:

thank you ^^ yea i also felt it, i try to fix that ^^

Edit : Fixed ^^